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Hi there! Nice chapter! So the first thing I noticed is this: " medium heighted quite a bit fat." that is really awkward. Maybe change it to this: " of ...

Thank you!! I will definitely edit those passages. :). If you wanted to read the first chapter, this one may make sense.

Thanks for reviewing!!! I'm glad you liked it. And you will get better at reviewing as time goes on, believe me.

That means a lot to me!

Again, Thank you! It is a struggle I am dealing with right now, so that is why the poem came to life.

Thank you!! :D

Also, Can you send me Fantascifi66? I can't find it. :(

I did just write the chapter today, though I may go back and edit it a bit. As for your chapter, I would go with A different Version of Snow-White, ...

So do I! I'm glad you like this and I'm glad you reviewed it! I'm also glad you want to be friends! :). And I didn't just review your story ...

Oh cool!!!

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. So this is really interesting! I like this style, and I like the way you wrote this. I wish ...

This is nice!

I do understand! I just started my first book as well! And you are welcome! :)

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