FireGoddess

Hey! Wow! That was powerful and true to the core. When my boyfriend dumped me it killed me. This story says what happened to me and most likely others out ...

Hey! Great writing! I loved the fact that no matter what you stuck to comparing the lady to a rose. But, I wish you would have given her some more ...

Hey! Good story but... I was left wanting more. For one thing, you had barley any detail. What did he do to make her not talk to him again? What ...

Hey! I loved your story!! I'm one of those girls who have a dark side and enjoy any thing that might be considered 'dark'. During Mars' time with Princess Claire ...

Hey! I believe your story was grand over all and it leaves the reader wanting more of your work. Wonderful addition of comedy at the end to seduce Ray to ...

Hey! The name is FireGoddess and I wanted to review your work! I found you poetry to have some truth. The character has dreams as an escape and mine is ...

This sorta reminds me of Guardians of the Galaxy. It would make for a great start for a love story where the main female character saves the one she falls ...