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Hey, TakeThatYouFiend! (I wish I knew a shorter nickname to call you!) This piece was definitely something that peaked my interest and I wanted to take some time out on ...

Blackwood, I love this piece as a beginning/prologue. My only wish is that we knew either the name of the "poster placer" or at least a description of what he ...

Heya, sbitonti! A short but to-the-point piece - I like it. Like modern, my favorite line is also "I've become a victim of life." That is a very strong sentence, ...

Hi, Buggiedude! I haven't read any of your other chapters, nor do I know if you even have any of them posted, but I will be checking after I finish ...

Hey, modernzombie! :) A review for you, at your request! I think since you've read some of my other reviews, you know the drill. I list three or so main ...

Hi, Mindfang! FireFox here to review your piece, Bad Blood! My reviews are typically written like this: I first list three of the main things I think you can work ...

Gemmagray, I can feel the emotion in this short piece. I'm not quite sure if your goal is to elaborate on this or what, but there are a few things ...

This was definitely a realistic piece, and I agree that she is absolutely a stereotypical teen, from the headphones, to the cell phone, to the attitude about her family. I ...

DragonLily, I think we've all felt this way at some point in our lives, whether we are young or older. I think that is what really makes an impact on ...

Hi, Aadygirl! :) I love this! And, as Brie mentioned, I feel that this would be better understood if you broke it up into stanzas. In fact, I also agree ...

NightWolf, this is an absolutely amusing piece! I loved it! Please write more!! If not for you, then for me! Haha! To be quite honest, I couldn't nitpick anything that ...

Blackwood, I typically don't review poetry, but I liked this piece. I won't nitpick, but I will point out a few things you could do to make this piece shine ...

dbrick, I love the concept of this piece. I like how you use the time lapses as well. To be quite honest, though, this reads, to me, more like an ...

Okay, I don't typically review poetry, but this piece struck a cord with me. My four and five year old sons constantly use the word starving. It's like a daily ...

This piece was a brilliant idea, Veni! I love the concept. What I typically do when I review a piece is explain the three main parts that were not so ...