FermentingFruit

Oh, it's been a while since I've reviewed a poem, but I'll give it a shot. First off, I liked this. Brief and to the point. Now, I'll try to ...

Hey Staarryskyy, here to review this poem you got goin here. So I guess I'll just get right into it. "Here is where I stand still. Though it is not ...

This was a nice little poem. Just a heads up, I don't usually review poetry, so forgive me if I don't really know what I'm doing :) Like zephion said, ...

Wow, this is really good. And really deep. This came from the heart, and it's really touching. You had some really good language, like when you said, "Then came the ...

Oh, you are my opponent, so it'll kill you that you can't review this one >:D This was actually very good guineapig. You used really great imagery, with words and ...

Alright great, I beat guineapiggirl here >:) This was pretty good, but there were a few places that confused me a bit. The first paragraph, if the story is based ...

Alright, I finally got to this. First off, I thought this was a really good piece of writing. Now I'll get into specifics. First off, I thought the imagery in ...