Feltrix

Thanks for the review! I'll fix the point of view; there have been multiple complaints about that.

Thanks for the review! There was no actual village destroying, that was just 2 siblings teasing each other. I can come up with something else if that's confusing.

Lumi, I redid the first chapter (a digestible chunk) and appreciate all and any reviews. However since you offered....

Feels like home.

And I'm up to date on everything that's happening in this mad, isolated town.

3.1415926535897932384626433... Didn't even look it up. My record is 51 digits. Oh, how far I have fallen.

Will Erick return to his rightful place as Frost Lark News Jailor? Also, I think Frost Lark's flag should be a white skull with two crossed white bones and a ...

Happy Armageddon Day!!

Up 'till now, I thought that the whole Lynn/Fitzgerald thing was mirroring Clinton/Trump, although the fact that Lynn is 12 should have been a giveaway. As far as I know, ...

Daylight savings time must DIE!

Thanks! I really appreciate advice.

When I say 'cold' or 'icy', I mean evil, but I have a problem with labeling any villains as evil or villainous in-text. Any alternative adjectives are appreciated. I'm bound ...

And in 4, the 'carrying across worlds' is foreshadowing.

Okay, first of all, thank you for the review. None of your comments irritated, annoyed, or hurt me. I want to address 2 in particular, though. The white character is ...

YES! The newspaper's back! We're saved! (Never thought I'd write that).