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Re: Undone
Why hello there :] So i just caught a few little things to fix -- This is a fixing color ! Evil knocks on the door Through the peep hole ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: I Undress
So the comment above got the gramatical aspect of it all. But I mainly just comment on how I like the work, because I'm not as good at grammar as ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Nymph
--Im going to say how much i enjoyed your poem :] I really liked how it was all haikus! It just added to how dramatic it was :] and i ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Thankyou for Deceiving me
Alrighty :] so i believe the previous comment was great. and i agree. But i would like to just review how i liked your poem. I really enjoyed it! I ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Sweet Tears, and Chaos. Part 2 Chapter 2.
I LOVE IT!! its so sweet!!!!! i love how jack is "in" but he wants to be out! and Callie sounds-- okay its just awesome. all of it :D. its ...
Apr 14, 2009