FantasyWriter76

As the author, I feel this chapter may have lacked in quality, but I promised TBB 7 and TBB: Tale of Ye'Dunn will bring back the quality the previous chapters ...

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Rain. Rain is a funny thing... stay tuned for more TBB (The Bard's Ballad)!

Thanks for your review, maybe instead of just picturing the scene, I should describe it too XD. But seriously, thanks!

Thanks for the advice! -Fantasy

Balasar's horrible vision must mean something... stay tuned for more!

Thanks for the review! Though there are some flaws that can be resolved by examining part 1. Balasar and Ruut are former prison mates and thieves. Also when Balasar says ...

The epic tale of Balasar and Ruut continues... criticism is very much welcome!

I thought this poem was quite funny, good job!

I have edited this chapter to be more easily processed. Thank you for the advice, and I hope you follow this tale.

Thanks for the advice! I'll try to keep things consistent again, and I'd be glad if you followed the story

I feel many people can relate to this poem. I myself can relate because I hate getting out of bed to turn my alarm off. I feel you've captured the ...

Thanks for the advice, definitely utilizing it next chapter!

This is just the beginning of the story, if you would like more please comment or review what is currently published.