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Hi! Great story! Loved it! It's a really fun idea, and it's kinda Moana-style! The only thing I want to say, is that you maybe want to say "her dad" ...

Hi! Welcome t YWS! This was beautiful! I almost cried! Is this something you have experienced? You just wrote it so real and good! It was so touching! There's only ...

Hi! This was so cool! I really don't have much to say. It was funny, it was smart and creative! The only thing I noticed, was why did she think ...

Wow... I honestly don't know what to say. This was beautiful but terrible. I love how you wrote this. I really do. And i also loved that you put a ...

Wow... Such a powerful poem. At first, you think that this is going to be a poem about how lovely Christmas is, and how the snow falls to the ground, ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! This is a really interesting prologue! A great starting point for a story! However, I have some notes: "Darkness could not enter this happy body, but ...

Wow... Wow..... WOW!!!! This was amazing! I really don't know what else to say. AMAZING!!!!! It was so intense! You got dragged into the story right away, and get A ...

Hi! This was a great story! I really loved how you made the story so spooky. However, i fell like it should scare her more that there is a trail ...

Hi! This was an amazing story. I almost cried! It was all so good!! How you introduced the characters, how you described the fight and how you described their death. ...

Hi! Really wanna review this, `cause it looks like a great story! But i haven`t got time to read all the chapters right now, so i read to the __ ...

This is a great poem! I dont usually read poems, so it surprised me how much i liked it! I could really see the river flowing before me, getting bigger ...