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Re: Chapter 1: Gone
Hey Mira(if I can call you that)! Fanta here for a review!! Firstly, welcome to YWS! And secondly... I. LOVE. THIS. This is one of the best stories I've read ...
Mar 5, 2019 -
Re: Shadows In The Dark~ Chapter 1
Hi!!! Fanta here to review! First, welcome to YWS! I really hope you enjoy it here. Okay, let's get into the review! Firstly, I would just like to say that ...
Feb 24, 2019 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 6
Hi!! Your friend Fanta here with the review you requested! I am SO sorry it took so long! I've been a bit... Nah, I don't know how to explain it. ...
Feb 18, 2019 -
Re: The Truth Told
Hello! Fanta here with a review! This was a magnificent, beautiful, stunning... I... I... Wow. Just wow. How did you even write this? It's AMAZING! This is one of the ...
Feb 3, 2019 -
Re: [DELETED]
Hi!! Fanta with the review you requested! Wow, this was really good! I really enjoyed it! Let's get right into the review! I couldn't find any spelling mistake whatsoever, so ...
Jan 30, 2019 -
Re: Sarah and the pink bunny Twiki: Chapter 3
Hey! Fanta here too review! Yay!!! A continuation!! Let's get right into the review, shall we? Speeling mistakes, suggestions and punctuation Now, there are a few spelling mistakes. Who am ...
Jan 10, 2019 -
Re: Life or Death Chapter 3 Report
Hi Shikora! Fanta here to review! Great! You're really starting to prepare for something big! There are some very few spelling mistakes, and some places where you can put in ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: Life or Death Chapter 2 Patrol
Hi my friend! Fanta here to review! This is another great chapter! Why don't we just jump right in? Spelling mistakes, punctuation and time. "“Where do you want to start?” ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: Low
Hi! Fanta here to review! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're having fun here! If you need anything, you can just PM me! Without further ado, let's get into the ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: Double Meaning/P.J.D.L.M.A
Hey! Fanta here With the review you requested! Just a note, not having to do With Your piece, right now i'm writing on a computer that has some loose buttons, ...
Dec 15, 2018 -
Re: In My Dreams
Hi! Fanta here to review! This is a great poem! I could really feel the emotions within it. Actually, the only thing I want to point out is that you ...
Dec 15, 2018 -
Re: The Beauty of the Unknown: Chapter 1 - In the Beginning
Hey! Fanta here to review! Firstly, welcome to YWS! It's nice to see that you are eager to write, since you released a story right after you joined! Ok, onto ...
Dec 6, 2018 -
Re: Imperfect Soul
Hi! Fanta her to review! Welcome to YWS! What a nice poem that we should all listen to, because its something we need to understand: just be yourself. First, some ...
Dec 1, 2018 -
Re: Danger on the dance floor
Hi! Fanta here to review! This was a very good story, and you used a writing style that I usually don't really like. But you surprised me, because I liked ...
Nov 23, 2018 -
Re: The Story of Chroman
Hi! Welcome to YWS! This was very good! Though I wish it would have been longer. And when I read it, it felt more of a summary of a story ...
Nov 14, 2018