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I liked it :D The key is a great character, he comes a across as witty and pretty funny too (I love the last bit of dialogue), while the door ...

Hi hi, I shall take you for a spin, if I may? Here we go... I get the sense that this wasn't really a planned endeavour? It feels very...half-done, incomplete ...

Yeah I know Brom dies, but Brom and Obi-wan were not that similar, Eragon is NOTHING LIKE LUKE (my personal oppinion) Handsome farm boy who doesn't know who is parents ...

I lol at his 'sneak peek' in the august 27 entry. Note that around the 0:40 mark he calls Brisingar 'awesome'. tut tut Paolini. And is it just me, or ...

Paolini is so arrogant that I wouldn't be surprised if that passage went like this. Eragon struggled to see past the blinding light which surrounded the figure like an a ...

Nice chapter. I'm a bit lost, as I haven't read pervious entries, but I'll try to catch up. For now, 'll do what I can. Sleep never found Colin, he ...

1. The bit where Javier takes the girl in seems a bit rushed and slightly unrealistic. I mean, if you suddenly found yourself lying on the street with dried blood ...

It was entertaining to read and a fair attempt while writer's blocked. When I was spewing stuff out to avoid it, the things that came out was much worse than ...

I just discovered your crit for Journey's Dawn (I was away at the time), so I thought I should return the favour. This is a nice piece you have here. ...

Maybe he thought fancy words would make up for his lack of talent... The lack of accuracy in Inheritance sometimes disgusts me. For example, why the hell is there a ...

Hello Rubric, here is my rather late review for your crit on Dark Tidings. I'll go through with a line by line, then a comment on overall story. Sixty riders ...

Helloo Squallz, I'll start off with a line-by-line. “By the way, how many bottles of juice did you put into the fridge last night?” “Around two dozen cans I think. ...

The writing itself has improved and you're getting your point across clearer with more force, but I have to nitpick on the subject. I had somethign to do with emo, ...

Victoria hopped down the steps of the elegant staircase and landed softly on the floor below, her pendant bouncing on her chest as it shined its tranquil blue shined should ...

Merry C bbb, I'll start off with a line-by-line. “So, what do you want for Christmas?” It only took one look at the fat, bearded man for the young girl ...