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Re: Cross My Heart
Hi! I love these song lyrics, they are very fun! The lyrics are indeed very uplifting. If this were a song I think it would be a very catchy one! ...
Mar 10, 2013 -
Re: A Mind Worth Losing: The Rain's Song (Part 1)
Oh! haha the website put it like that and I don't know how to fix that :( but alot of the spaces, like "Thesilent" should and do say "The silent" ...
Mar 10, 2013 -
Re: A Mind Worth Losing: The Rain's Song (Part 1)
Thanks! I have never been to good with grammar so thanks for pointing that out! It really helps! :)
Mar 10, 2013 -
Re: Life's Hell.
I like th line "Squinting past dancing red for salvage". but by dancing red, you mean flames right? I think that this is a very descriptive poem. I like it.
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: Chapter Two: Murderers Mask.
This is super cool! Very descriptive.
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: Burning Love-Prologue
Wow! This is super descriptive!! I love it alot!
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: Sudden Discomfort
I absolutley loved it!
Mar 9, 2013
