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Re: Paradiso
This story is amazing but the thought of that world makes me angry.
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Only you
Thank you That is how I felt last night.
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: one day in her shoes
Absoluteley well said.
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Sanctuary
I like it how it is. Preety good.
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Dawn
Preety interesting.
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Camellias
Yea a bit of more rhyming would be nice. For example the last line maybe something like... kidnapped by this curse.. Just a thought. I really like it without the ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Timeless
Very beautiful poem. Keep writing.
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: My Mime
I very much enjoyed this Keep writing poetry I got the basis of the poem
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Adam and Elle.
Pretty good. No chatspeak. -- Snoink
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: "My Book" (Chapter 5)
dang! your seriously my favorite writer hear now :)
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: "My Book" (Chapter 1)
ahh vampires are my fav characters great idea making a story about a girl who changed
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: The Vampire of Praile
wow
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Lavende Rose Chapter 2
oo I love a good vampire/werewolf story Please pm me when you post the next chapter
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Ghostly Aficionado chp 1
don't space it out as much overal great good to a story
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Cherry Blossom Part 1
Fix your grammar and puctuation and this will be a very good story.. When does part 2 come?
Feb 20, 2008