FadingBrighter

Of course! Thank you for all your hard work in writing this!

Thanks for reading!

Hello! I don't think this was intentional, but the grammar in your title is incorrect. I am assuming you meant the star that fell from the heavens or something along ...

Alrighty, I hope you don't mind me coming in here and leaving some comments! I prefer mostly to focus on style and characterisation so let's start this party, shall we? ...

Thank you all for your comments. I'm terribly sorry for the mistakes and the horrible programming as well for the rough writing. I wrote this on the school computer at ...

I thought it was brilliant. I love your language and your choice of words. It adds wonderfully to the story.

Great work!

Hello to all of you, who were probably dying to read the rest of the story...=) Im so sorry! After school started I had no time to wright! So I ...

To all of you who like my writing but think i am lacking in plot: you are quite right. Therefore, you should read my novel, Demon of the sea, and ...

Tada! the much awaited fifth chapter! Bring out the marching band! Just kidding. The truth is, i started the story from the beginning. I have no idea where it's going ...

A little violent? Ah well, it was a good story. And I liked your character, though im worried. Is she your bad side, cuz if so, I need to stay ...

Just posting this to all who have followed my story: I have only typed chapter four up today, so if you see an mistakes in the plot, tell me! Also, ...

Thank you both so much for your replies. This was only a short thought i wrote after a seen in a movie. im very glad for both your comments and ...