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...EMO!!!! lol Well, with a little work it could be really good! :)

I honestly don't know what to say--I really don't. I don't know what the heck I thought. I don't know if it was good, or bad, or weird, or strange, ...

Ok, You're completely in the right on the rhyming bit. As for the rest, I suppose we'll just agree to disagree, then? That sounds good to me. :-)

Whoa. random rhyme = funky. also, I'm pretty sure "corners me down" is against some grammar law or another. Why exactly wouldyour ears get red when you're terrified? -confused- Oh, ...

Wow...this was REALLY good! Oh my gosh, this poem is amazing! The unique comparison of people to plants is very nicely done. This is a really good poem!

I...don't know what to say--it was weird, it was hard to follow, it was not the good weird. It was really strange and the lack of punctuation made it harder ...

Sorry about my typo--I corrected it and put it in bold. Thank you all SO much for your corrections on my grammar (I did a really poor job for a ...

I rather liked it, although I agree that it was a tad anti-climactic. Really nice use of extravagent vocabulary--it was really good! :D

Thank you all for your responses--I'll be sure to include them in my next poem or story. :D