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Sweetie, pick another number for the title.

well that sure didn't work. Nevermind

I thought this was the cutest chemical poem that I have ever come across. You may want to check some of your facts, though. Also, Some of the wording should ...

LO frickin L

Thanks for the review. It's funny, though, you say the lyrics should be "I've been" but in normal speech (at least around where I live) "I been" is just how ...

Yeah. I agree. fricken ironic.

Wow, lots of multi-postage! I think you should say on the last line "Crash to the ground" or something. It sounds more dramatic than "float in midair"

Suckup... :) In as a poem, this isn't perfect, but the sentiment is sweet.

So... uh... Do you have a girlfriend? Just kidding. Your too old for me anyway. But I loved that poem! Wow. Just...Wow. It needs some work rhythmically. But the voice ...

This make me giggle. Have you noticed that rock songs always sound funny without the music. I'll try to imagine it with rock music! *strains* ah. Got it. Ok. this ...

Yeah, It is bland. That's why I don't usually write love poems. They turn out dumb. This one is a writing assignment.

I guess I didn't make it clear enough that it is a song... that's why the repeated stanza... The rhythm sounds better with the music playing in my head... Thanks ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone!

Feel free to tear it apart in any way. I wrote this last year. Feel free to tear apart anything I write. I like it. It helps me improve.