Explosive_Pen

Woah. Thren, this is wonderful. I loved it. As the truth is, is that is was never gone at all I have issues with this. I think it'd read better ...

Hey there. Welcome to YWS. I'm a nitpick this, so comments are in bold, 'kay? I was thirteen when I got my first Micheal Kors watch. Fourteen when I got ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm a critique this for you, 'kay? Standing on foreign ground Too distant to recieve your warming rays. The ice on my barren surface Wraps ...

I am always amazed when I read your poems. You have such a great sense of rhythm and rhyme. I didn't spot any mistakes, and I've no critiques, because how ...

God Twin, you actually critiqued that? Really? I can't. It only matters if there's no meaning and really, the meaning's there, it's everywhere. And really Em? I may not know ...

Simple, short, and sweet. No wasting words, no long, fancy descriptions. Just the simple truth in four lines. It takes talent to condense thoughts into something short and understandable. Which ...

Hi! Wow, I could barely find anything wrong here but, being my OCD self, I did: You knew was I was thinking, and squeezed my hand. This should be: "You ...

Hi there anti-pop! Nitpicks: But boy , did that man beat the ever - loving crap out of me. I swear , my backside must’ve been bright red for the ...

Woah, is all I can say. The title was eye-catching, hah. Now, of course I wouldn't know about the full truth of that statement, but in the sense that people ...

Hello! I really did love this poem. However, I believe some nitpicks will be necessary, no? I wish you wouldn’t look at me that way Delete the "that way". It ...

Haha! Anti-pop, your poems are always so humorous, they always manage to brighten my day. I couldn't find anything to critique here, other than the fact that some lines are ...

Hahahahaha!!! Can you say, "roflmao"? This is so completely true. I have these kinds of disputes all the time. Of course, the real drama is when the characters from different ...

Told you they were all short, Twin! Anyways, you should let me do some rambling. I'm an expert on writing everything about nothing. :D Kidding! I mean, this could use ...

Hi anti-pop! I shall review this while listening to loud 80's music. Let's see how good of a job I go while head-banging to Guns and Roses, shall we? The ...

Hey! "I was sixteen; with top grades, silky brown hair and I used to run track. " In this line, a comma would work just as effectively as a semi-colon. ...