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Contact by Carl Sagan A Canticle for Leibowitz by Walter M Miller Lucifer's Hammer by Niven & Pournelle The Andromeda Strain by Michael Crichton Hitchhiker's Guide to the Universe by ...

Wow this piece is getting ripped to shreds. Anyway here’s my review of this piece. (Is it the final polished copy?) The choice of words in the first stanza is ...

Get yourself some better insults Because with “geek” you’re a bit late. Maybe change it to you're a bit too late? Hey there. I'm Aushy, and I'll be reviewing your ...

This might cause some controversy around here as I know there are several fangirls/fanboys but Twilight was easily the worst book I've ever read in my life. The author was ...

Wow, I love this piece. The first piece I enjoyed on this forum that didn't have any technical aspects that bugged me. The only think you should change is the ...

Hello Dr. Seuss. The rhyme scheme is horrible. It's really simple. No offense but it reminds me of something I would write in grade 2 minus the vocabulary. Like OverEasy ...

I found the syllables to be distorted with the other lines so...the end result was a weak flow. The concept could be refined into something much more and deeper. For ...

*skips formalities* This reminded me of Alice in Wonderland for some reason... Well,the rhyme scheme is really simple/boring. Remember your poetic devices! This piece is not entertaining. It's a more ...

Wow. Just wow. I loved the ending. It's brilliant. The imagery is fabulous. I agree with fragile heart, you started off the piece like you wanted to end it. A ...

Quick review: Well the past reviewers already touched base with your spelling/grammar so I'm not going to do that. For me I found the rhyme scheme to be simple and ...