ExOmelas

Hey, I started going through this before I read your author's note, so I'll briefly review then talk about the subject matter for a bit. at least then I would ...

Hi there, quick thing first of all: I'm not certain, but I think this ought to have a trigger warning. It might be my own experience with friends giving me ...

Well, ouch. Also, welcome to my attempt to review a poem that I read and like, which I'm normally too nervous to do. Let's see how this goes. I am ...

First of all, before I read this, just so you're aware there's a forum where you can post these kinds of things. I'm feeling guilty about probably going to post ...

Random sidenote to begin with: I really like the font. So, from a neutral perspective, ie as a reader who isn't your friend, I need a bit more explanation of ...

Heyyyy guys, Nit-picks first: He was the one who had to put up with the multitudes of exes that his brother had, all coming to him to mope. He couldn't ...

Hey Dragon, don't know if you saw what I said in discord, but I'm pretty sleepy, so I apologise if this is a bit typo-ridden. Nit-picks first: I wasn’t going ...

Heyyyy, Nit-picks: Asha struggled not to speak would probably flow better if this 'Asha' was 'She'. “They don’t know any different! They’re animals. They may be the same species as ...

Hey Storm - I have wifi! Nit-picks first: Three quick raps at the door rouse Tense switch here damp because I dropped it in a puddle For some reason I ...

Hi Dragon, Nit-picks first: my annoying alarm aiding me with that. "aiding" seems like an odd choice if she's annoyed about that. but I need to show him some hospitality ...

Hey Dragon, Nit-picks first: I was slightly flattered by his courtesy. This is a bit tell-y, and "slightly" doesn't really sound like something a person would say about themselves. I ...

Hey Dragon, I was actually wondering what you were going to do when you were talking about figure-skating xD Pretty excited to read this :) Nit-picks first: I felt my ...

Hi there, I was going to do nit-picks but your grammar is on point so I'll just skip to critiquing the construction of your argument. However, Christians are not supposed ...

Hi there, nit-picks first: Those seas are only were they end. Really not sure what this line is meant to be "Those seas are only the end"? "Those seas are ...

Hey Storm, nit-picks first: Asha frowned from under her hood, narrowing her eyes through the rain. This isn't that important but you mentioned rain a lot in the first few ...