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Re: break the silence
Hey there, I'm here for my final Green Room review of the month for the Knights of the Green Room's Order of the Ravens! The first thing I'm thinking is ...
Jul 25, 2017 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 13
Hey again, Nit-picks and nice moments: She stood next to Focci, who had flopped onto his back and was snoring up a hurricane, watching as Captain Maj checked boxes on ...
Jul 24, 2017 -
Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 8
Woot woot! Nit-picks and nice moments: "It is horrid," she whispered, casting her eyes to the ground. I forget if I've said this before or not but I think you ...
Jul 23, 2017 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 12
Hi again, here for review of the day for team tortoise. Nit-picks and nice moments: grossed-out, wide-eyed look Why is he grossed-out not just angry? But like everything else in ...
Jul 22, 2017 -
Re: Fremione/fan fiction based on harry Potter
Hey there, I'm here for my review of the day for Team Tortoise :) I'll pick up on some nit-picks as I go through then give you my thoughts overall. ...
Jul 21, 2017 -
Re: The world will move on
Hi there, I'm here for my review of the day for Team Tortoise. I'll do some nit-picks as I go through then give you my thoughts overall. Nit-picks: And the ...
Jul 20, 2017 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 11
Heyo, I was trying to work through my green room reviews for this month but I couldn't find anything that caught my eye - so here I am! Nit-picks and ...
Jul 19, 2017 -
Re: Honestly, I'm Conflicted
Hey, I'm aware you're not looking for reviews but as a Knight of the Green Room it is my duty. let I don't know what to do Pretty sure you ...
Jul 18, 2017 -
Re: She Likes Girls
Hey there, I'm here for my review of the day for Team Tortoise :) The first thing that springs to mind here is that we could do with much more ...
Jul 17, 2017 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 10
For some reason I'm struggling to face the green room today so imma hang out here for my Team Tortoise review of the day :) Nit-picks and nice moments: Wrecktrix ...
Jul 16, 2017 -
Re: Exiting the Clave's Strict Closet (Malec Fanfiction)
Hey there, I'm here for my review of the day for Team Tortoise. First I'll pick up on some nit-picks then I'll give some overall feedback in some different categories. ...
Jul 15, 2017 -
Re: Jesper Gone.
Heyo, here for my review of the day for Team Tortoise :) First thing I want to mention before I get to the main review is that I'm unsure how ...
Jul 14, 2017 -
Re: Moonlight:Chapter Two
Hey, I'm back again, here for my Team Tortoise review of the day :) Nit-picks and nice moments: Maia was startled for a second, before regaining her composure. "OK, so ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: lie
Hi there, I'm here to review this for my Team Tortoise review of the day :) As a quick quip, this is quite successful. It's not something you expect, so ...
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: The Ice Queen Chapter 8
Heyo! Nit-picks and nice moments: Soon, I quickly returned the favour You don't need both "Soon" and "quickly". which starts at 12:00 AM in City Hall London. 12am is midnight... ...
Jul 11, 2017