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Hey again Dai! Great to see you've edited. An adjustment of her sleeping body set it precariously on her perch But "it" do you mean her body? Might want to ...

Wow, um. Thank you all so much for you kind words and your likes, but this thing is over two years old, and it should really stop resurrecting by now. ...

Since this isn't an actual chapter in your novel, I'm moving it to Other. :D

Hey again, Tigs. :D Please don't take offense at anything I've said! I'm simply here to give you my honest opinions, in the hope that they can help your edits ...

This was accidentally posted twice: to review, post here ! *locked*

Moved to dramatic poetry, since this doesn't seem like a short story. ;)

Feel free to continue your discussion in this thread . ;) *locked*

Moved to Fantasy Novels, then. ;) For future reference, please post all continuing pieces in the genre-appropriate novel sub-forum.

I'm going to lock this, since you've deleted the content. If you ever want to put the chapter back up here (which would be completely okay!) just PM me and ...

Fantastic. This is clearly a work of literary genius. (And I'm liking the fact that I get to give orders. :P)

Very interesting! I appreciate the response and clarification. The problem is that you're not doing your job as an author if it takes 500 extra words to explain what your ...

Thank you guys so very much, especially since this was such short notice! :D I also wish I had submitted this earlier, but I hadn't been sure I'd be able ...

Moved to General Fiction Novels.

Posted twice-- unlocked version to be found here ! (Aspiring, if one is an edited version or something, PM me and I can unlock it.)

Moved from Short Stories to the Historical Fiction Novel sub-forum!