children of god chapter 1

by thecherryblossomgirl
  • May 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter
  • Science Fiction

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Evi
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Evi commented · Sun Jun 06, 2010 5:20 pm

I'm going to lock this, since you've deleted the content. If you ever want to put the chapter back up here (which would be completely okay!) just PM me and I'll unlock it for you.

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Griffinkeeper
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Griffinkeeper wrote a review · Thu May 27, 2010 10:55 pm

This story is very hard to follow. As I read the story, I began to ask myself questions like "Where are the quotation marks?" and "What a weird format." Finally I asked myself, "Why am I reading this?"

I think the formating is so uniquely original that it is distracting me from the story, which is never a good thing, unless your story is bad, in which case it is a blessing in disguise.



You must never give into despair. Allow yourself to slip down that road, and you surrender to your lowest instincts. In the darkest times, hope is something you give yourself. That is the meaning of inner strength.
— Uncle Iroh