Evi

Ello, dearie, mind if I take a quick look-see at your lovely little poem here? :wink: On a lonesome night Wintry, crisp – remote (Why the dash? Another comma would ...

I had absolutely no complaints with this poem, dear. I've seen your poetry, and just finished reading another poem of yours-- you truly have great poetic talent. I loved 'This ...

*raises hand* I'm twelve, dear. 8) These comments about this being good for a twelve-year-old just tickle me pink. Your twelve-year-old-self will understand? XD Are you not the same person ...

Anzius! I'm here! As promised! Ever though I'm late! (By the way, are you the same person as Amniel? Because I'm getting confuzed.) One thing I really must say is ...

I'm almost afraid to even attempt to reviw this (and I think that's why there aren't any reviews thus far) because it's very difficult for me to wrap my head ...

[s]And[/s] I know you will be better when I go; Don't begin poems with a conjunction. Also, you don't need this semi-colon-- it can just be a regular comma. and ...

Back again for more, Anzius! Brace thyself. King Ashurbanipal was lying on his bed. He coughed weakly and turned towards the golden double doors that opened as his secret police ...

Nice job, Evi. Love it. Line-by-line translation of the bill of rights. Brilliant. XD ...I'd love to swoop in and steal all of the credit for this, but, alas, it ...

Princess! *brings out trumpet* You get my 100th review! I saw that this only had one little lonely review, and you're so awesome, so I had to give it to ...

*Evi alert* I love short stuff. :D It makes me happy. Veni Vidi Vici I came, I saw, I conquered - Julius Caesar I think that's a very cool way ...

*Evi alert!* Aww, Rosey, this was so sweet! I think it was a wonderful idea, something very clever that I would never have thought of. Sorry for the delay. :oops: ...

Ahh, romance. *sighs wistfully* Thanks for posting in my Examination Emporium! I'll pay extra attention to your grammar and sentence structure, although so far it seems that your English is ...

Hiya Darko, I'm Evi and I shall take a look at your poem today. I see it's an entry for Rosey's contest? Behold! Behold [s]of[/s] the beast The 'of' is ...

Ah, m'dear, it is only fair that my very own CBF gets my first critique as an Instructor, ya? Perfect timing to post a poem. You must have been waiting ...

With the wave of your hand you say " So what? Tomorrow this will all blow over. " Well (comma here) I've got some news for you. Yesterday's tomorrow is ...