Evi

Here as requested, Anzius. ^^ Let's see what we have here. The commander walked with confident steps to a squat young man. The young adult had evidently got the short ...

Hi Rae, I'm Evi. ^^ She was nice [comma] but I only ever saw her when I was sick [comma] which wasn't often. You're missing some commas here, which would ...

Hey, AliceRose! ^^ Evi here. First of all, you should really know that you've spelled your title wrong. >_> I understand, typos happen to everyone...but, please, proofread next time? It ...

Hey Whyte, welcome to YWS! ^^ Quick note-- one of the site's main rules is that you have to post at least two reviews on someone else's writing for every ...

I haven't yet read City of Glass, and it's been a while since I finished the first two, but I really thought they were good books. I'm extremely religious, and ...

Elsewhere , by Gabrielle Zevin. I thought the concept was really interesting (once you die, you go to this sort of limbo-afterlife and steadily grow younger until you're reborn on ...

Hey angelwing. ^^ Evi here. Your title should not be Then there was three . It should be Then There Were Three . And note how I capitalized every word ...

Hey Curly! ^^ I'm not going to lie-- for anyone to become a good writer, they do have to work hard, no doubt about it! We're all making progress, learning, ...

Hey Sabine! ^^ Don't think I've seen you around before. I'm Evi, nice to meet you, and I wanted you to know that I really enjoyed your poem. I'll just ...

Eeeeek. >.< Okay, sorry for the monstrously long wait, I epic fail. Do you forgive me? :arrow: Alright, I'm not going to do nitpicks, because I think you can find ...

Hey Mars-- thanks for the review on my entry; it was indeed helpful, and I did edit some. ^^ Thought I'd take a look at yours! Alright, so. I was ...

Poppity! =D You're going to enter Cal's contest?! Awesome. Get writing, girl-- you've got today and tomorrow to crank out four entries. ;) Alright, so. This was so short, I'm ...

CBF!

Hey Winter! ^^ Thanks for using my thread. You love historical fiction, apparently? Awesome. :wink: Well, there was that one small incident involving a carriage and a deep puddle of ...

Hey Unster! ^^ I see Gal has attacked your poem, eh? :P Don't worry-- not everyone on YWS is quite so brutally honest. I'll just give you a quick run-through ...