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Re: It was my birthday
Its a very cool idea and you can go in so many directions with it!
Aug 29 -
Re: It was my birthday
I want a poem full of metaphors of how it feels when those you know forget your birthday (just meaning that you drift away as you grow older perhaps? Disagreements ...
Aug 29 -
Re: Harmony is a dream
[Comment and just ranting, not really a review just silly opinions] I kind of don't get why having two sides is a struggle? They can help you out for sure. ...
Aug 25 -
Re: The Girl in Photographs
Fortunately* not unfortunately.. unfortunately is negative, example: "I unfortunately couldn't come to my best friend's birthday party." Fortunately is usually positive (unless used sarcastically) exa
Aug 24 -
Re: Queen Bee
I'd like to defend the movie and Prince Charming. Remember those scenes in the classic Disney films of them walking together, perhaps they were speaking together and perhaps they were ...
Aug 8 -
Re: picture-perfect polyhymnia
I personally saw the footnote part as people don't really take time to notice who created the art and they end up as a footnote of something made by their ...
Jul 13 -
Re: remember when john green said if i show the world my belly it will devour me
1: I felt a feeling of shame and weakness, maybe sorrow? As if someone had taken the narrator's energy? 2: The point where the poem became emotionally interesting was Like ...
Jul 13 -
Re: january's photographs were snowy white
I don't even remember what I did in May, you got better memory than me!
Jul 9 -
Re: freezing point - prologue
This a lovely prologue which makes wonder what will happen to the narrator it feels like it's setting us up for very long, very breath taking, heart thumping adventure! And ...
Jun 4 -
Re: H I
Thanks!
Jun 1 -
Re: H I
Thank you! I just had a random idea one day and this popped into my head! Thanks for your all your suggestions too!! :)
Jun 1 -
Re: It’s a shame, isn’t it? :(
I'm sucker for horror, I love it and I don't know why in a way I love but in another way I don't. I love the drama, oh will James ...
May 29 -
Re: Is Nihilism a product of comfort rather than suffering?
Hello! This makes so much sense! I really love your reflection on Nihilism here. Of course if you have all the time in the world.. then what are you fighting ...
May 26 -
Re: Rain...?
Are you using AI to generate your review(s) and stories?
May 19 -
Re: Rain...?
I'm not feeling sad so don't worry amazing how the human mind can write such trickery! ;) I really do love the end of my own poem, I just want ...
May 19
