EvensLily

Hi inthebeginning! There is not much I can really comment on, because your Grammar and sentence structure is really good! I disagree with hudakp, I do not believe this is ...

Thanks so much for the comment! I'll re-look everything :)

Thank you Roxy! xxx - I'll keep it all in mind! xx

Okay, thank you! - I'll re-look the last line :)

Thanks soo much for the great Review! xxx xx :)

Thank you xxx

OMG - Yeah, kinda funny! Thanks a lot

This is really good, I love the interaction between the characters and how you described the human race, Cannot wait for more! xxxx

Brilliant!- I haven't read the others... well there goes my afternoon! LOVE IT! X

I love to title, Silence... A broken romance. Brilliant! The character and writing depth was brilliant, so much emotion in such a short space of text. Brilliant, loved it! Love, ...

I get what you all mean! No harshness intended, this isn't my best work. Thanks for you're comments you helped! X

Really good!! When I saw the warning, I was slightly nervous but I made myself read on and so glad I did, perfect! cannot wait to read more :) Love, ...

A great piece of writing here, really is. I was immediately sucked into the events, really interesting, can't wait to read more! Love, Evenslily x

This is an amazing poem, truly loved it! I loved the way it all seemed to come together. It's what every girl wants to hear! Love, EvensLily x

This is a brilliant Poem, with such depth! Really Loved it, truly Inspirational, I'd love to see more of you're work! Love, EvensLily x