Evangelina

Alright. I have a tendencies to go with abstracts that dont always fit. Thanks for all your advice!

I HAVE TO KNOW MORE!!! please post

This is really nice, Am!

-crit ticket- I love you.

What is a ginger? I seriously thought that when I would read this story it would be about stalks of the root.

Yeah, I forgot to add the mature label too. Um, are you gonna read it?

Wow. This is great! I love the feeling, you have great word choice, "shamed is the sun" is awesome!

thanks to you all, and sorry for not responding back for a while. Isis, I love your new name

No it's supposed to be put together as "passing fugitive moments where you think 'perhaps I have a chance'" Thanks!

Thanks all...three of you! I'll work on it. And yes, stupidlittleeric, I am not hate-filled it should be better.

Ha-ha, thanks Pie. Thanks for reminding me that there might still be hope for me :]

Well, 19 doesnt mean anything. I've read better stuff on here than in that book.

Very interesting. Good plot. I'd work on dialogue formatting, it's a little hard to read as it is. -evangelina

Thanks eric...

Thanks for your advice!