Evander

...I did well?

GET HIS NUMBER. Oh, I was trying to review this from a view point where I did not know about your crush. ;)

I agree!

I'm actually not going to edit this! I can't really. This is once of my earlier writings and I'd hate to taint it with older, more experienced me. :)

:D

:D

Haha, you really did show me no mercy! I would edit this, I really would. However, I simply do not have enough time. I spent, maybe... a year thinking about ...

That happened to me.

Oh, from the beginning I was suposed to describe the signs. I haven't gotten to it until now. >.< Thanks for the review! (I'm trying to make my next chapter ...

Hi, thanks for the review! I have chapters two and three. Would you like if I posted them?

It's all mostly in her head. She has a bad reaction to adults that needs to be explained.

Sure...

Just to save you a lot of tears... "Holding a...bloodied whip. 'Come here, darling. Let me hurt you...' Brema had a creepy smile on her face."

I was told that you didn't need a space after ellipses... Uhg. I'm so confused! See you soon!

Congratulations.