Evander

Heyo, TJJProductions. I'm Evander here for a quick review. Let's get started! I originally clicked on this chapter because I was really intrigued by the summary. Two girls with the ...

Hello, Trashcan! I'm here for another review. Writing a male character is pretty much the same as writing any other type of character. As long as he's well developed with ...

Hey, Storm. I'm here for the review that I promised you. Before I start, I want to preface this review that poetry is not my area of expertise and I ...

Hello! I'm here for a quick review! “Have you ever breathed air this fresh?” This leads me to believe that the Magnus War might have caused some severe pollution problems ...

Hey, Trashcan! I'm here for a quick review. I quickly read all of the other chapters, so I have a pretty good general sense of what's going on. One of ...

Heyo, DemonGoddess! I saw this in the back of the Green Room and I thought I would give it a shot. Here's a good article on prologues and their function. ...

Hey, DemonGoddess! It's Evander here for a quick review. Before I start, I will preface my review with this: I appreciate what you're trying to write here. I will be ...

Hello, Flumadiddle! I'm here for a quick review. Let me preface this with two things: One, it's been a while since I've written a review, so I might be a ...

Hey! I'm back with another quick review. Once again, let me know if there's anything you'd like me to specifically focus on in future reviews. Half an hour into the ...

Hey! I'm back with another review. "Hide!" m ama whispered to me. Since "Mama" is a name/title, then it would be capitalized here and in all other instances without a ...

Hey! I'm back for a quick review. I'll be adding in the little nitpicks that I see along the way. Let's get started. I ambled carelessly down the dirt path ...

Heyo! Welcome to YWS. I'm here for a quick review. Let's get started. The dialogue in the first paragraph, while interesting, also feels a bit disjointed in places. The information, ...

Hello, myjaspercat! I'm here for a review. I'm not sure if this was a stylistic choice, but "Within My Blood" (with the capitalization) might look better for the title as ...

Hello, Legacy! This'll be a quick review. Mom, this is an open letter addressed just to you. Aren't you excited to hear what I have to say? As far as ...

Hey, outvaders! I'm here for a quick review. I have to say, this was an interesting short story. It very much dealt with the physical feeling of catharsis, as opposed ...