EvaR14

thank you! I really appreciate you commenting, have a nice day :)

thanks so much! good luck to you with your own writing as well :)

thank so much for the review! I'm just trying to get back into writing which is why this is so short, I'll definitely try and write longer stuff in the ...

thanks for the review

thank you :)

thanks for replying, and thanks for explaining the fifth stanza! Honestly your poem's really great, thanks for sharing it!

Thanks for the review :) This scene is a character remembering what's happened - they say "you" bcoz they're sort of remembering it as an apology to the girl they're ...

it's alright, one day I'll figure it out lol

thanks for sharing :)

Came here from Pending because I really loved the poetry there and I'm glad to say I love this too! I really like the opening "How far can a breath ...

okay yeah, sorry. I'm sure its great tho lol (i can always read the translated version with google)

thanks for the review :) honestly tho - I've not rlly written that much so idk what tips I'd give you, sorry. I guess I'd have to just say to ...

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Loved reading this! It's easy to read and simple without seeming childish. I really liked the imagery, especially at the end. "peaceful, like a bird in flight" really creates an ...

Thanks!

Funnily enough, I was actually reading Lord of the Rings when I wrote this - maybe it influenced me. Thanks for the review :)