Esmé

ahleylee, Well, I’ve recently noticed that you have three chapters posted at the moment. Pff. Three more hours lost to you, Isadora, Nicandro and the others, yes? Feel ashamed of ...

ahleylee, Tad bit long, yes, but I know the feeling, and cutting it into pieces is like cutting yourself, yes? Irritating also, but bloody in the first place. Anyhow… to ...

Kylan, Well, here I am, reading ‘part one’ after ‘part two’. This time I come bearing something (a tad bit) constructive. Quote: Looking out of the shattered department store window, ...

Kylan, Me sitting down and writing and/or singing paeans for you, as far as your work is concerned, wouldn’t do you much good, no? Alas, nothing else is left. I ...

Porcelain, I know those line-by-line grammar critiques can be sometimes boring, but I’ll do it anyhow, just because I’m nitpicky Esme. That’ll be followed by more general quotes, and then’ll ...

Heart, That is, if you don’t mind me shortening the username. But, to the topic - your story, that is. As my current story starts in classroom also, I’m all ...

Nutty, As you yourself said, it’s terribly short and so hard to critique content-wise. But what was shown, I liked, and so a plus you get on that. The beginning ...

I read the book recently, perhaps some three weeks ago - I’m currently in the Classic mode. It was a bit ‘heavy’ to read, but I found “Wuthering Heights” very ...

Personally, I don’t know what to think of these books, and if truth be told, I’d rather be free of them. Free in the sense of not waiting for the ...

Alainna, Who is the one being apologetic, hm?.. XD I am so very sorry I didn’t get to this earlier, but, on the other hand, I didn’t get to anything ...

Hello, Originally it was the next installation that I wanted to critique, but I though that perhaps I should start from this, yes? Also, as was asked, I ignored the ...

Hello Katharsis, I don’t think I have ever cirtted your work. Or maybe I did - my memory is not all that good, lol. Anyway, I shall crit the prologue ...

Aedmir, Sadly enough, I am guilty. I didn’t read anything of yours before, though obviously this is a continuation. However, since I feel this strange need to critique - and ...

Hello, Today I will be your critiquer, lol. As always, the boring grammar stuff and that kind of thing will be at the beginning (though there will come a time ...

I haven't read any of her books, but I saw one on Amazon, and am having my father... uhm, Santa Clause give it to me for Christmas. Santa is a ...