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Kamor, Hello! How are you on this oddly sunny day? And can you imagine that it’s warm, too? I mean, the last two days were positively horrid! And today was ...

Quibbons, Hello! And interesting username you have, you know? I like it ^^ Quote: The air hung with the fumes that poured from the factories, a dark world surrounded the ...

Dunnskee, In desperate need of overwhelmingly positive reviews, hmm? Oh, pshh. Overwhelmingly positive reviews aren’t cool. Quote: I rode each day, and saw the same fields, fish ponds, and farm ...

Anna, Hello! How are you on this lovely, horridly rainy day? Yesterday was cloudy, and only raining a little bit, and today, can you imagine, it’s both cloudy and rainy? ...

Miss Feckless, Hello! And did you know that it’s still raining? I mean, it was raining yesterday, when I forgot my umbrella, and it was raining earlier on today, when ...

Jasmine, Ello again. Hopefully you are you’re fine on this cloudy, cloudy day - well, night. But cloudy it still is… And it rained today, you know? And I forgot ...

deafwriter, Hello! Wondering why this piece caught my attention, hmm? Lol. Anyway, your critique: Quote: But there were still so many. Okay, this might be me, but I don’t get ...

Hershey, Lol. That is probably the most constructive comment you’ll get from me - felony indeed, not nice at all. Poor teacher, though I imagine your mom was in a ...

Kaylynn, Hello! How are you on this ever so cloudy day - well, know evening..? Hopefully well (: Quote: She glanced behind her and saw a Shadow, she had to ...

Gracee, Hello! How are you on this cloudy, ever so cloudy day? Me, I think I have a cold, but never mind that now. To your critique. Oo, the dialogue ...

Sunshine. Hello! How are you on this cloudy, cloudy day? I trust that good. (: Quote: Another peaceful sleep rudely interrupted, he thought wryly, opening his eyes so that they ...

Cris, Hello again (: Quote: I was locked in my own mind, I had already been to hell and back. Odd. Consider: “I was locked in my own mind, having ...

Warrior, Hello! Welcome to YWS - I hope you’ll love it here (: To your critique, though: Quote: ..."In other news..." “… in other new…” Quote: ..."A thirteen-year-old kid today ...

Anhirke, Ello, how are you on this ever so cloudy day? Do you know that it’s raining? Horrid, no? Ah, but your review^^ Quote: The sky today was properly grey ...

Sunny, Hello! I don’t think we’ve ever met - but welcome to YWS (: Your review, though: I think that Nutty covered the grammar issues, so I won’t be repeating ...