EscapeToNeverland

Thank you so much!!

THANKS!! I'm glad you've enjoyed it! Just incase you didn't know I've posted quite abit...

I liked this. I did. Only problem is, is that I actually was hoping this was going to help me fool someone on something. But oh wells. I still liked ...

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked this, to be honest I didn't know how people would react to this chapter, it being the third chapter and it going ...

Thank you for everything you've said, I'll be sure to take it all into account.

Thank you for everything you've said. I must say I did rush this a bit, though it really isn't an exuse for the poor writing of it. I find it ...

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I wrote this like 5 months after the first 3 and a half chapters, so it was hard not to say to much ...

Something like that happened to me when I first posted. Try putting it in a poetry format. It might work, it might not.

Ah, the auras. I was really expecting someone to say something about it. Unfortunately I can't say to much about them in this, it'll get to confusing. Same with the ...

Just encase you wanted to know I posted that Prologue finally....

Aww!! Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it. Well see I'd started writing it but I hadn't actually written the Prologue. So I decided to go back and write one. ...

S'fine. Hope it helped in some way!

That makes sense. I'm just a grammatical nut I guess. Even though I my self don't always have the best.

Thanks. Well I did rush this one a bit. But cause I'm feeling really ill at the moment I should be able to write for most of the weekend. I ...

Thanks. I was rushing a bit with this chapter so I didn't really read over it. Hailey is meant to be like this, very typical and everything of the like. ...