Eros

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Actually Tamao wasn't into violence and the whole thing that he saw, Michiko's cut bleeding and the cut was made by herself. And it wasn't meant to be sexual. He ...

Thank you so much 1nspire !! I am really glad you liked it...

Yeah, exactly !

Thanks a lot !! You inspires me !! I won't stop now.

No he wasn't supernatural ...his eyes were red in anger... Just that's it... Thanks a lot for the review !! It was indeed, helpful and I realise it has a ...

Actually one day she is meek and the other day she is strong ... Sometimes extremely anxious and sometimes full of tears. There's a problem with her... actually I wasn't ...

Yes ... That crush and the rumour part needs a little more thinking lol. That is not sounding so realistic right now would be better to change it and improve ...

Yeah ... You are right about the silent and the staircase thing ...and about all the other suggestions... I loved the review... Thanks a lot !!

Yeah ...I got the point... I will surely try to edit it... loved the review... Thanks a lot !

Lol I still watch the show...

Hi there, Icy! Loved the review... Thanks a lot for the review ! I am so glad you liked it...

Lol yeah, They are from cartoon, Doraemon. I have corrected the mistakes ...

Hey, weirdo ! Nice to see you again ! I love your reviews. Thanks for the review. I am glad you liked it...

Yeah ..the ending seems blunt... I have changed it... I meant creation of creation... Firstly human is a creation, and he created blank papers...so... Creation of creation...