Eros

Oh ...yes. Love this story... A few nitpicks though, Viper spun around only to come face to face with Quake again. Viper let out a nervous chuckle. Quake turned around ...

Yeah I will!

Yes pleeease!!

Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it!

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it ..

Thank you so much, Carlito for reading the chapter and giving the tips that are really helpful... I'll edit this and keep it in mind when I write next chapters...

Thank you so much, Carlito!! I got the point... Character development and breaking the scenes .. thank you so much such a helpful and inspiring review!!

Yeah sure! I'll keep tagging you whenever I write something new .. till then you can read any of my old works ... Like the short story, "The Dog and ...

Thank you soooooo much!! I am improving because of your review... It was a very helpful review!

I have edited a few things ...will you please have a look and give more suggestions where I could improve more...?

Yeah ...I am trying to edit it... In fact, I have edited a few wordings... Struggling to make it sound more poeric... Thanks for the review!! I am glad you ...

Thank you so much!!

:D welcome!

Thank you SO much, Stor !! I am glad you are liking the story ... :D

Thank you so much, Sree!