Eros

P.s. Overusing and thing is absolutely true ..knowingly or unknowingly it happens, should be avoided.

Yeah, i realised i stead of realising would be better... Thank you so much for the review!!

Thank you for the review!! Glad you liked it...

Thank you so much, Sweta!!

Thank you!

Hey I changed the ending a bit ... Will you please look at it and tell me if That has improved a bit?

Thank you so much for the review! Glad you liked it :)

Yeah, I have done it!

Absolutely loved the review!! It wasn't discouragement lool I loved that roar like an injured bear, or is it more of a shriek like a cat getting stepped on its ...

Yeahh I looove eagles!!

I wrote a he because i saw it as a character in my poem .. though, I will edit all the little things like repetition of colours etc... Thank you ...

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it... :D

Yaay ...okay! I will add the was there... Thank you for the review!! Glad you liked it...

Yaay, I got it! This would make the poem Blaaaaasting! I will add something to this one ...:D thanks !!

Actually though Boliver didn't like Adam and had a quarrel too, but he wanted to catch up with him because he didn't want to lose friendship with him just Because ...