ErikaHale

Hi there, Cheaperpoetry! I fell in love with this piece the first time I read it. The boy's constant babble is so engaging and realistic that I can't help but ...

Hello there, Chiravian! To begin with, I'd like to say that you are great at all the things I'm bad at. Your descriptions are absolutely lovely; your characters are well ...

Huh, genuinely interesting... I always liked to think that all children, no matter how angelic they seemed to be, had a mischievous side. And here you portrait that perfectly. Word ...

Huh, quite bewildering indeed... The word choice is very much appreciated since it gives the poem a bewitching aura. I also enjoy how in between the metaphors of bodies and ...

Oh Good Lord... I can completely relate to this girl! Growing up I knew I was different, but I never saw it as a bad thing. I never tried to ...

I'm flabbergasted. A very intriguing chapter. I adore the flashback were Ning gives you a bit of a back story. It helps the reader comprehend the story a little more ...

Oh good Lord. What an incredible piece of work! I don't want to offend you, but, I believe you've made a lot of improvement between this chapter and the previous ...

To begin with, I'd like to congratulate you on your word choice. The language is complex but not too much. It helps deliver the emotions of your story perfectly. The ...

Nicely done! I appreciate the word choice and the wordplay. And of course it is extremely touching and heartfelt. I would like to congratulate you on the poem itself. War ...

I'm simply flabbergasted...what an incredible poem! I want to, first of all, congratulate you on your word choice. The old fashioned adjectives and the common sayings are in harmony. I ...

A very interesting piece. Rich, powerful and abstract, like the rest of your work. I think it's an intriguing concept, and I love how the characters have such human qualities ...

I'm sure that if Miller or Dostoyevsky were alive to read this, they would smile brightly. They would look at each other and say "Finally, some real competition!". I absolutely ...

Wonderful poem! I adore how you balance the predictable lover's dialogue with sassy comments. Because love is like that. A mixture of sappy compliments and heart stabbing insults. And of ...