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Re: Pennies and Drains
I love this poem it gets your point across really well and I love how at the ending you explain how there not poor anymore ect very good I have ...
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Re: The Kill
I love these lyrics I can imagine what it might sound like with music and voice well done!
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Listen Very Closely
Great job I love this poem! Good to now that I am not one of the only people who notice this happening to our world. Keep writing!
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: I Hate Him.
Its a cute story although maybe, a bit much like Twilight. Other than that its good. Keep writing!
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Exhume
Nice one! Would love to hear more :)
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Hand Vrs. Head
I love this poem it is very true :)
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: As yet forgotten
I understand the bit about the last two stanza's is not that good I shall work on it. RememberMe its supposed to be about a child who always feels like ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Thanks for the tips i'll try to add on and edit it soon :)
Nov 27, 2010