EnchantressMuffin

I liked this! It was clever and interesting, but a little hard to read because it was one big spindly chunk. I think that if you broke this up into ...

I'm fairly bad at critiquing lyrics, but I'll give it a shot. :) Well, I liked the first line; it was great and really drew me in. The rest of ...

This was... hm... I'm not sure what it was, or how much I liked it. Hm. It was kind of hard to read; I think that partially was because all ...

This was... wow. Beautiful. There's so much emotion wrapped into this, so much pain and sadness and tears. It's lovely. I am so so sorry about your friend's mother. I ...

So, this was... interesting. Very emo and... well... it wasn't very good. I mean, there was a lot of stuff in there - teardrops, rose, dying, heart breaking - that ...

I like this! It's really pretty and well-rhymed. I like the idea, and it's not too overused and delivered in a cliched way. I think, though, that it might help ...

Wow... that sounds almost exactly like those old movies, like The Haunted Mansion, or whatever it was called. You know, the one where everyone goes to an old mansion of ...

Well, this was... interesting. The title reminds me of a story I wrote for this month's school paper. I wondered for a second if some unwitting plagiarization had taken place. ...

You know, I never saw what the big freakin' deal was about this whole series. They're the classic angsty romance, weak-heroine-gets-her-chestnuts-pulled-out-of-the-fire-a-thousand-times-by-annoying-ma

Yup. Not much to say about this. Nothing to say, really. It's one of those pieces that you read, and your brain just thinks, "HUH?" so you have to go ...

Okay, I know this is probably an insane thing to point out, but you misspelled "Rapunzel". Needs an A. Those tricky little names have it in for everyone. And as ...

I liked the concept of this; it's very original and makes a tasty read (and no, that was not a cookie pun, I actually say things like that). I don't ...

So I found this when I was browsing through the Contests section, and since I've read a lot of your poetry and, for the most part, liked it, I clicked ...

You should definitely put something in about the challenges she's going through... otherwise it's just unnecessarily confusing, and anyways, why should anyone care if they don't know what she's going ...

I've never actually read a Stephen King novel... I can't say I'm ashamed to admit it, but I'll post the smiley anyway. :oops: So tell me... what makes these stories ...