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This was great, really effective and a really good read :)

Thank you :) And thanks for the tips there also.

Thank you =D

The random breaks in rhyming was to symbolise the breaks in unity. Like how you could get so many people to unite then there would be the few every so ...

Thanks for that :) Glad you liked it :) Can you explain which parts of the rhyming you were talking about because there was a weird little idea I had ...

This is really good. Kind of gave off the feeling to me that how she is at present doesn't represent her past and how she is at present could be ...

Thank you very much :) Glad you liked it :)

Thanks for the review :) That about the repetition is well taken in, shall definitely influence my next piece.

If you are quite new to poetry and can write that you should seriously write more =D

Thank you very much for the good review =D Really encouraging. Glad you enjoyed the read :)

Thanks for the advice there, well taken in. I'm going to take that advice and fix up this poem a bit better. A lot of my bad grammar comes from ...

Thank you for the review :) It's a shame when somebody has to experience the same as the character tbh :/

Thank you for the review :) It's a shame when somebody has to experience the same as the character tbh :/

Thanks for the review. Really glad you liked it :) I added the "hate disguised as a joke" as from personal experience it's too easy for somebody to put you ...

Enjoyed reading this. "Your eyes are like the universe" and "Meanings, hidden" were definitely the lines that topped it off for me :)