EmmaJane

I'm doing these very slowly. :smt003 Possibly in the vain hope that when I reach the third chapter there'll be more up. ^^ So, yes, the review: I didn't pick ...

KJ! How are you? ^^ I got mixed up. I'm reviewing this, not the other stuff. Sorry! :D But I can do others too if you want... Anyways. :smt023 Nitpicks! ...

Hey Beth, EmmaJane here as requested. :smt003 I love the song "wires"! So sad. I hope this won't make me cry... :smt023 Nitpicks: I'm running now. Running to the entrance, ...

Hi there, Tyler. EmmaJane here as requested. :wink: First of all, I can see this is a little too long and daunting. It would be easier and less daunting to ...

Hello! Sorry I'm so late! :oops: It kinda slipped my mind... Anyways, you wanted me to pick out American words and find the English version? A few may have sipped ...

Hey there, Sophia. Welcome to YWS, A.K.A. the mad house. ^^ I can see you've got a great story going on here so I shall review it! :smt023 Nitpicks: “Master,” ...

Hey there! EmmaJane here with a review for you! Nitpicks! only 50 feet from the beach, then swam 5 feet. Ah! Numbers should be written out (unless they're stupidly-long ones). ...

Hawkie! How you doing? ^^ So, this is a great piece. Funny :smt043 But on with the review! My nit picks: “AND THE STUPID PRIEST! I tried to teach him ...

Hellooo there! EmmaJane here. :wink: So, I'll start with nit-picks first. Cleopatra's Golden eyes. Cleopatra, may I say, is an amazing name. One of my favourites, actually. ^^ Right, I'm ...

Ha ha ha!! Hilarious. :mrgreen: I see a problem or two with this little extract. I yelled (stupidly) in shock. Ah! Brackets! Maybe use commas instead? : I yelled stupidly, ...

Hey Rosey :mrgreen: Seeing as the nit-picking's been done, I'll point out what I like, and my own nit-pickier nit-picks. If that makes sense. ^^ Once upon a time… So ...

Okay! This has been killing me!!! Arrggghhhh!!! How can the Gemma Doyle series end up here! "The Worst Book You've Ever Read" :cry: *dies* "A Great and Terrible Beauty" is ...

That was beautiful. So well written. Like Shina, I saw it on the homepage and just had to read the rest. Kiddie Katie is a great character. ^^ Wonderful read. ...

Hey, EmmaJane here. So I've noticed you've gotten a little impatient. Settle down girl, no one will want to review someone who calls them hypocrites and idiots. There's no need ...

Shina! ^^ I'm here with a review for you! Although I don't think anything I have to say would be really that important. :smt110 You legend. I must say, beautiful, ...