EmmaEaton

Hi, Very funny story you got here! If you don't mind me asking um, how did you come up with it? What way your inspiration? I really like the way ...

Hi, I will not say I pity you but, wow. This is an emotional poem. Really long but, worth a while. I really like it. "The bitter taste on my ...

Hey, I like the ending a lot! My favorite color is Gold and Wine like burgundy. I like this colors because first of all they are not the plain black ...

Hi, I agree with JuliaNicole this work has potencial and I think you could develop it a lot. I really like the start (which I believe this is). I will ...

Hey Arzoo, Nice lyrics. I see there is so rhyming, that's cool. I would add a bit more to it. I see this is a great start but, try to ...

Hi Lesdenore, First of all, you should read your short story. It has great potential but, there is still a ton of work to be done. Some ideas are not ...

Hi EverWinter, I really like your story! Is there a part II? I just have one thing to pick on. Why Nathan and Nathaniel? They are technically the same name ...

Hey ErikaHale, I really liked this chapter. No offense but it's better than the last. It's very detailed and interesting. I hope you don't mind my nitpicking and comments: "...watching ...

Hi Erikahale, You had an interesting start. I really liked the characters. But, I still don't know anything about them. I can't root for a character if I don't know ...

Hi MrTallJoker, I really liked your poem. I'll just do some nit-picking! I hope you don't mind. "I'll try to remember, I'll try." I'm not sure about this, I think ...

I LOOVE this poem!!! It's so funny. I was going to point out the word "ignorant". Being Ignorant is not necessarily a horrible thing to be. We are ALL ignorants ...