Emerson

Yes, I don't like these simple poems. I was really hoping it would go morbid and it wouldn't be her friends. XD In some places, you have commas where you ...

It's cute, and childish, and simple--but that's it. ^_^ It isn't bad, but I like deeper poems. Poems about jump roping children? Yes, I like deeper poems.

From what I can tell, you only changed the punctuation and a couple of lines. Even so, this version flows so much better. It's beautiful. ^_^ This edited version it ...

I need to download this...

I upped this to R because it does use the F word a lot more than I think should be PG-13 ^_^

Ah, Romance ^_^ Just noting to you and to myself that I've read this!

Eek, dear. This gives everyone great competition! Lovely. Just posting as a note to you and to myself that I've read this.

That was really creative! A lovely entry. This is just a post to let you know, and to remind me, that I've read it.

Ah, a charming satire! Just making a note to you and myself that I've read this.

Oh, quiet a twist for the original. ^_^ I'm just posting so you will know, and I will remember, that I've read this.

Ah, yeah, I turned this in. ^_^ but thank you anyway!! I'll go ahead and lock this thread...

Thanks for the pointers! Yeah, in the story, they mostly call him Cal. I might just go through and call him Cal throughout the whole piece, rather than switching back ...

That was confusing... But if it weren't for you I would have been even more confused! Spaceba, and now I go to listen.

*squee* I'm excited about this, and it isn't even for a novel of mine xD Lovely Kelle ^_^

hmmm... The line breaks are better. Have you ever been in caves? I forget your geographical location... In Missouri, we have oodles of caves. I love caves. I've been to...four, ...