Emerson

ooo. I didn't know there was a book? I'll certainly have to read it then! I tried watching one of the movies, but got a little freaked out early. This ...

hahah, I liked it. It was so full of math-like puns and general puns and foolishness that it was hard not to laugh, and so I liked it. Awesome job. ...

Since I've gotten several out cries for the last line, can I ask: what should I do? Is it a matter of word choice, topic, description. Should I add imagery, ...

Edit. :lol: Thanks everyone!

This poem is too short. It is like The Red Wheelbarrow , but this is just too short for me... It's too simple, bland, there isn't anything I can get ...

I love any book suggested by Samichan. I will look for it. ^^

Moved to Dramatic Poetry at the authors request .

The majority of this isn't written in proper script format. I have never read a single script that has quotes in it. You may want to do some research on ...

hmmm what is this book about?

Edit! Again, thank you. :D

Is there going to be a second part? It seemed to climax that there was a huge secret to be told, and then it ends... if there isn't a second ...

*locked* Go read your other thread, the same one, in the non fiction. Oh, but while I'm here, don't repost things when they are already in other sections and locked. ...

hmmm I still have a problem with the comma, comma, comma period thing. But I'm going to steal what snoink does it see if this helps you.. My mind: filled ...

Reading the edits. :) We allow the sharks to shred our children that we may attempt again to succeed. [s]We will salvage what we can and then re-build. I am ...

What am I supposed to review about this, exactly...? The grammar is fine, and it reads like a public service announcement. But isn't it supposed to have that tone? Although, ...