Emerson

I liked it, and can't really make any complaints other than I didn't like the last line. You already said it at the beginning; try to end us on a ...

Finally, I get around to this. You don't know how sorry I am for being so slow :-) Follow the trail of the moon’s blood[i/].,the message had said That period ...

It was good. Of course, I would have to reread it a few times to get what was actually being said, because the phrases used were so long. But thats ...

I'm not going to agree or disagree with anyone above; I'm going to make my own critique. *sigh* No arguing over critiques people, come on! It'll only annoy the Writer. ...

This is a very small snippet of something much longer, I hope... You are missing the beginning punctuation mark for 'close your eyes'. The title is 'vampires' but other than ...

I'd love to critique your poem right now; but I'm loaded with homework. You said you wanted punctuation help? I wrote an article on Poetry & Punctuation that might help ...

What was the point? In some points it was...interesting. I liked some of the technique, like here: with him i am quixotic, neurotic, lethargic, euphoric. But it doesn't follow much ...

Good job for trying! But, you still need helpful shoves in the right direction. What feeling am I supposed to be taking away from this? What am I getting out ...

So you wrote a poem about...star wars? *is very confused* As a poem it is a...bad poem. People read poetry in hopes of being able to take away some emotion, ...

I liked it, it seemed to flow nicely. One thing I didn't like, it just didn't seem to flow well within the poem, was the transition from describing the looks ...

I loved reading it. I can't give as many words as Collen did, though. I picked up the Victorian sense, and I've always loved things like that. I'd go through ...

Perhaps I am only your error catcher? ‘Try me.” single quote instead of double quote. curling his lip and flaring his nostrils as he did so. I don't like how ...

Todether Forever My Love I typoe in your title? I'm guessing so. I wont let go, neither will you. won't is a contraction, and so, it needs an appostrofy. I ...

I liked it but... I'm left without something. Maybe its because it was so short, as it is a haiku. It is good, most certainly it is good! But I ...

This... Isn't much poetry. I am left only to assume you are new to poetry? I have several suggestions for new poets: 1. Read poetry. Read it like if you ...