Emerson

They were left alone, if their family was religious enough to believe that they as well would be cursed for sheltering a demon child. Are you missing a word here ...

Unlike the above, I'm not a sucker for poems like these :-/ It's the same thing you see every day... what makes this different from the tons of other poems ...

Told ya I'd get around to it :-D Just took me a while. To remind himself, he [s]realised[/s] realized suddenly. To remember. [Comment on the spelling change: this may be ...

Mad made several good points. Though, should not you capitalize 'I' the pronoun? And I do find the spacing for 'who am I and who are you' obscure. Not to ...

Adam mentioned typo stuff. (You licked Jack again...) You should consider writing narration for documentary shows. I have two things I'd like to say about these new style chapters you've ...

*glee* aw this makes me want to finish Ch. Even more....*pouts* Nobody thought John Wayne Gacy was capable of raping and murdering thirty-three boys. I remember you taling to me ...

Wow... incredibly violent, psychotic, and twisted. You have such a skill for writing, really. The whole entire time I am going through exactly what Jon is going through, but in ...

Can I say what I usually say? WTF. haha. But either way, this was awesome. WOW. You should have yelled at me for getting behind in this! You are amazing; ...

I'm sad I got lazy and missed this... Dang, I am SO far behind. Think I could catch up in one night? XD That was really good. I want to ...

I liked it, I guess. I can never make much of these type of poetry. (My mind doesn't work this way.) But this seemed wrong: Such comfort lies within the ...

I'll take a stab at this :-D “Okay-- here you go.” He smoothed on a sticker where the needle had been. You can change the -- you have into what ...

Reading by suggestion :-) The story, the basic story, is a well thought out one. It's intriguing, true to life, and could cause a lot of psychological things to come ...

I enjoyed it, but sometimes the lines felt as if they were all to long. The rhyming went well, and the story was true to life. I think if you ...

As for Mr. Brown, he came away from the entire incident with nothing more than a hole the size of a basketball in the back of his head and a ...

Over all, improvement! *throws confetti* But in some spots, I don't like it... For her the indifferent earth would rage, Its mountain ranges torn asunder, [should be a period] For ...