Emerson

Jon was all cleaned up, dressed in jeans and Kyle's t-shirt and asleep but finding himself clean and in different clothes Exactly where did they get these clothes if they ...

All I can probably do is echo and expand on Chandni—she knows what she is talking about. This is one of them because I feel it disrupts it too much, ...

"Ms. Clinton," Is she not married? I am not too clear on these things, but then should it not be Mrs. Clinton? I may be wrong. You know, I feel ...

Noticing my name upon the screen (and to return the critique you have given me) I have come to give this a look ^_^ Upon first notice: you have an ...

It was certainly neat, and some aspects of it were really unique, like the way it started out like the prayer, "As I lay me down to sleep..." (Isn't that ...

ooh. I like it! It's very pretty. I liked the last two stanzas the most, "verbose" being such a pretty word, and the last really capturing it over all. It ...

I've always loved the a,b,b,a rhyme scheme... Providentially, he was potentially, [11] [s]Enamoured[/s] enamored by the [s]glamour[/s] glamor [7] Of his near flawless stammer, [7] Till the words he sp

Isn't this the one you wanted me to critique? Oh well.. .:-D In the stilled sands of holy time she preyed . Preyed/prayed. I assume you do mean prey, and ...

I like it. The sonnet set up is beautiful. But, at some parts, I'm a little lost for what you mean. When I say some parts, I actually mean, just ...

Eh, I don't usually critique lyrics, because lyrics are meant along side music, but I will anyway. Sorry if I critique it all too much like poetry; I am too ...

Hoy Colly! I liked the flow it had, though it was a bit off in some places. It flowed but... it didn't. Which is neither good or bad, just my ...

I like the theme you are trying to present, asthma attacks. But I think it would come off a lot better if, rather than listing and describing, you made the ...

As I Run This Blade Threw My Flesh threw=through In A Hours Time I'll Be Out Of Breath "a hour" could debatable also be "an hour" (h is sometimes vowel ...

It was long... X_X You realize you confuse the crap out of me? Okay, sarah coming out of no where. I get it. Jon? There isn't much of an explanation ...

Typos scattered here in there. And in the last line, should be an. Pulled through a plain, like a toddler with a blanket. "plain" doesn't make sense to me. It ...