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Re: What was. What. is. What we put off till tomorrow.
I love the format of your poem, and how you make use of different sizes, the use of bold font, and indents to create a contrast between the different lines. ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: [un]familiar
Hey! I love this poem. I love it so much. It is absolutely gorgeous and also really eerie. I don't know exactly what it's about, but even so, I got ...
Jun 8, 2021 -
Re: diploma, n. < Latin diploma an official document conferring some favour or privilege (OED)
Hey! I absolutely freaking love this poem. It is amazing. You captured the feeling and the horror of being a student so well, the complete farce that is the modern ...
Jun 8, 2021 -
Re: What really goes on inside my head.
Hey! I loved reading your interesting reflection on the thoughts in your head. It read very much like a more refined version of stream of conscious, one reflection floating into ...
Jun 8, 2021 -
Re: What happened?
Hello! I love this poem. The development was the best part. I started out this poem thinking it was just going to be a review of the past, a description ...
Feb 20, 2021 -
Re: Dodging Poison
Wow, this was a really good poem. I can feel the sorrow coming through; it’s clear that you have a lot of really strong feelings, and I commend you for ...
Jan 23, 2021 -
Re: My Mistake
Oh wow. This piece is so sad, and I can completely relate to everything you’re writing about. I can feel the speaker’s sorrow and regret coming through the computer screen. ...
Jan 22, 2021 -
Re: wandering the woods without a god
I love the first stanza. It immediately draws me in as a reader, and I feel the intense fear of the speaker. Everyone has had that moment where they’ve felt ...
Jan 22, 2021 -
Re: Cry Pretty
First off, I’d like to say I love the ending. It is so unexpected, and yet wraps up the poem so beautifully. I thought it showed something interesting about the ...
Jan 22, 2021 -
Re: Poetry Anthology (Part 1)
Entry 1: I loved the contrast in this poem between the idea of the constancy of the world and our own precarious position. I also really liked the rhythm of ...
Jan 19, 2021 -
Re: My Roommate is a Detective is a Fun Class in Detective Drama
Hey! I have not heard of this show, but after reading your essay, I think I might want to watch it. It sounds really cool. Your essay does a great ...
Jan 16, 2021 -
Re: i pray before i go to sleep but i don't know who answers them
I love your poem! The reflections on sleep are so cool, and the imagery is really vibrant. I felt this poem had a bit of a philosophical edge, reflecting on ...
Jan 16, 2021 -
Re: Atelophobia - Prologue
Wow! This piece was absolutely amazing. You did a great job building tension, especially with a topic that isn’t about life or death or love. It’s a relatively simple piece, ...
Oct 22, 2020 -
Re: Winter
First off, I love the use of the word azure! It’s so interesting and fun, quite a contrast to the bland “blue” usually used in describing the sky. I also ...
Oct 22, 2020 -
Re: A Mask Or Three....
I love this and the way you explore the idea of masks and hiding your true self to fit into society. I also like the way it rhymes- it gives ...
Jul 26, 2020
