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I love the way you painted these pictures. This is one of those pieces that doesn't seem like a piece; it seems like a painting. I'm kind of shaken up ...

I have to say, I disagree with the other review entirely. I wouldn't change a thing about this piece. :3 I like the way it seems like an apology you ...

Hi! I like your writing style here. :3 I think it's cool how you dropped your commas and periods in interesting places. It can make it a little bit hard ...

I like this! Especially the last part. Like, it doesn't matter how tough and resilient you are, you're still you. I like it. The only criticisms I have are the ...

I really like this. :3 I like the way you made her sound like she was eight-and-a-half from the way she talked, and I think you did a good job ...

I absolutely love this. I really like how passionate you are that people actually consider the words and don't just scan them for correct grammar and big-word usage. I really, ...

I love this! I have to ask, though, is it a true story? Cuz you don't have to be used to writing something if you can feel it. :3 getting ...

I like this. :3 I am a little bit confused, though. In the beginning it's being told in first person, but in the last paragraph, it goes into third person. ...

I really like this poem. I understand how you feel, too. There were a few missing punctuation marks, but that depends on how you're writing it--I know that sometimes when ...

I really liked this. :3 I thought it was really well written overall, and I think the first paragraph does a really good job of pulling the audience in. I ...