Elizabeth

Pretty good considering all hope has died for me and haikus. I read one... several yesterday that tore my soul apart and made me cry. Nice job on these ones ...

But... RANTING!!! It is the wine of the Gods, it is the motion that make smy soul breathe, it is me. A ranter. I'll work more on this... I can ...

I posted it the day after Valentines day, that should count for something... but apparently it doesn't :P

Alibird, she is, So frightened, she is. so morphed, she is, Alibird, she is. I KNOW SHE IS! I KNOW SHE IS! I KNOW SHE IS! I KNOW SHE IS! ...

This was soooooooooooooo cute! I don't mean to come off weird but it was cute. Nice one and I hope you win! IT WAS SO ADORABLE! *Will later probably become ...

Ok the sad thing is that I have no idea how the song goes but I tried to keep it in meter. Ex boyfriends are fun to hate :)

Too short. Too forced. Too confusing. AROO! You need to capitalize that I.... yeah.... heh.

I had to re-read this agin... wow... it's been a while. But yeah, considering I'm entering High School this is pretty much what I don't want to happen but might ...

... Sir, I'm pretty sure that HE doesn't have the letter T in it....

LIGHTEN UP???? NEVER!!! then I'd be ugly Grey coloured :(

Sort of odd rhyming me with me though.... fix it up a bit, but otherwise it's ok.

Heh, I helped with this. I liked it still... but now I re-read it, no offense, but the rhymes still bug me a bit ...

I think... I'm having.... a heart attack.... These are lke all the ones that people SHOULDN'T POST! We're writers, thus the name of the society. So write like one or ...

"Words and phrases cut me deep, And pierces and scratch my mind, They swarm around my head always, And sometimes make me cry." Better but.... pierces and scratches without the ...

Everybody else pretty much got what was to be said... it was alright though. It was pretty and .... sort of depressing :P I liked it otherwise.