Elizabeth

Well done. I'm doing a oice segment in my blog and I'm going to recite your poem FIRST :) It's like the writers alamanac on the classical music station here... ...

... OOOOF! Sometimes I feel just like that last stanza... This was beautiful... I really ... Wow. I'm jealous. I wish I could write like this again. I love this, ...

I can sort of tell I've come a long way, I'll work on it when I have some time... which will hopefully be SOONer than NEVER... hee... Brad read it ...

Good beat. Sad poem.

Don't worry, my cough drops taste like friggin' awesome strawberry candy... like CREAM SAVERS only better!

There might be a chance once I get the long enough attention span! Hmm... Yeah, I'll try and get back to that as soon as I can but I have ...

short, simple, scared me... Man I'm so tired.... *YAWNS* Simple... it's a pretty song... *zzzzz*

Whoa man, so much repitition can only do so much man. I don't really know what to say.... Just, don't repeat stuff much... Deep man... *YAWNS* Alas, my baby cries...

Not lengthy enough... I mean, honestly, it's not something you should change, but I've read a ton of poems and somehow the word "blood and ink" are getting cliche... but ...

this was deep, I liked it... and it as worded beautifully... and it was deep... (I love using that word.)

GAH! ... if I must, then I will... it's like 2 AM... ... ... I'll work on it whenever I can sneak back on lol.

I don't think I meant surreality in that burden, sick part... I think I missed a line... I was going to say something like You're too busy living in Lala ...

My opinon of angels are entirely different but I did enjoy reading this... though it seemed really fast...

I would have to say... ****. I can't read them now sadly... Again... Damn time... Hee hee... Jolly wave.

............ I like/love sharks too... and I never thought about making a shark year... I'm not rich though... (Oh well I love sharks and money too, it's awesome)